BLOOD FRIENDS

Chuks was ready to go out. He reached for his briefcase.

‘I need your help, Chuks,’ James said.

Chuks fingers tightened on the briefcase handle. ‘I am almost late for work.’

‘I know, but I need some money.’

Chuks thought as much. ‘How much?’

‘Twenty-five thousand naira.’

Chuks hissed, lifted his briefcase and made for the door. He grabbed the door handle then stopped abruptly; he turned around. ‘What do you need such a fortune for?’

James’ face was weak with earnest. ‘I will send twenty to my old mama at home and use five to hold myself for the now.’

Chuks shook his head. ‘I don’t have money.’

‘You have to help me.’

Chuks shut his eyes for a long second. ‘Please James, let’s leave this talk till the end of the month…’ he turned to the door.

Chuks

‘I can’t wait that long. It has to be today.’ James rose to his feet. ‘I have a feeling all is not well with my people. I can feel it in my bones. I just must do something, see?’

Chuks faced James. ‘You should have told me before now. The month is half gone and I don’t have money!’ Chuks was shouting but there was no malice in his voice, hard as he tried.

James sighed with filial helplessness.

Chuks boiled for a quarter of a minute in which it was impossible even for him to talk. Then he calmed down, turned around saying, ‘I will see what I can do.’

‘Wait.’

Chuks stopped at the door. ‘You sure want to get me fired from work!’

James hurried to their desk/table, tore out a small piece of paper and wrote something down. He walked to Chuks. ‘Take; this is the account number you should send the twenty kay to. As for my five, I need it cash.’

Chuks held the paper in his hand as though it was made of egg shells. He looked up at James. ‘I only said I would see—’

James slapped him on the back. ‘Forget it man, I trust you.’

‘You are sending me to rob, James. This pressure is too hot.’

‘You can bear it, Chuks. I am counting on you.’

Chuks looked straight into James’ eyes and saw the bond between them, a bond fuelled by time and toughened by collective hardship. Chuks dropped his gaze and scowled at the paper. ‘Monica—how do I know she isn’t your girlfriend?’

‘I wish. She is my only sister o.’ James laughed but it didn’t warm the cold worry in his face.

‘Is she pretty?’ mischievously.

‘No, she is fat and ugly.’

Chuks pouted at James then sighed. ‘James, you are a bad boy, do you know that?’

James opened his mouth wild with mock disbelief. ‘I am a good boy o.’

‘I know, but you are a bad boy, a good bad boy. And you are my friend…’ he swallowed hard. ‘And you are also my brother.’ He looked at the paper in his hand. ‘I will try everything within my powers to make this happen, man trust me.’

‘Come on Chuks, you are late for work, go, go.’ James opened the door, and pushed Chuks outside. ‘Go jor.’ He shut the door and leaned on it. Chuks’ talk was coming out in slow rush of sentiment so he had to put a stop to it. If he hadn’t thrown Chuks away he would have cried, the tears were in the backdoor of his eyes already. And it was too early in the day to cry.

(The Above is culled from my Work in Progress)

Tweets to @oke4chukwu

Advertisements

13 thoughts on “BLOOD FRIENDS

  1. Ayodele

    This is the only excerpt i’ve read that eliminate arguements and fights. I’ve been made to understand that there’s more to their friendship than living together. For the overall review, this piece is descriptive and touching. Keep up the good work bro. . .

    Like

  2. Walt Shakes

    which kain yeye friendship be this? who da heck is this James? Mscheewwwww! There has to be more to this friendship for him to be so blithely presumptuous about Chuks’ help.

    PS: Check this out. ‘James’ face was weak with earnest.’ Earnest used as a noun here doesn’t apply. Just saying.

    Like

    • HARD VOICES

      It will be blithely presumptuous of me to expect you to understand in five hundred words a friendship that has gone seven years in tens of thousand words. If you think this friendship yeye and still read it through then I must have achieved my primary goal for writing.

      As for ‘earnest’ I will gladly accept it as a misappropriation of adjective, a grammatical mistake. But it is a mistake I learnt from Oscar Wilde (read his Importance of Being Earnest), and a mistake I am proud of!

      Thank u.

      Like

  3. Ayodele

    Many of the readers have to understand that one can’t really judge a storyline from excerpts of the story. Excerpt is just a part of the story that ignite questions in readers; questions that will be answered in the book, when published. So when criticizing an excerpt, do give it a critical thought. Thanks.

    Like

  4. benny penny

    its an amazing piece,, that shows the essence and trust of friendship…… it emphasized the adage…. “a friend in need is a friend indeed”……keep it up

    Like

  5. Yemie

    A story of two friends I see. Ones that stick closer than brothers. With friends like Chuks, who needs brothers?! Nice! However, with all of this ‘bromance’ going on, I’d think James would find it an absolute delight for his sister and his bestie to get together, which therefore leads me to ask ‘why are guys always against their friends, dating their sisters?! I see it all the time, its just so weird! She’s fat and ugly he says, classic I say! LMAO

    Nice one Kingsley, can’t reiterate it enough, your sense of humour’s SLAMMING! LOL.

    Like

  6. Adaolisa Ezeh

    I no dat james purposly did dis in oda to get chuks. A guy wl ask his folo guy somtin but he no go gree do most espcialy in money aspect but wen it com to woman he go sabi get d chicken change! Na wht i observe 4rm dis tory. I no dere , daru! Lov u my king

    Like

WE ARE BURNING TO HEAR WHAT YOU'VE GOT TO SAY

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s